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Post by Angel Summers on Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:51 am

Looking Back Now
Looking back now
I wish i would
have said something
maybe you wouldn't
Have walked away
You wouldn't
have got in your
Car and sped away.
You wouldn't have
Been speeding and
You wouldnt have been
In the accient.
You would still be here by my
Side. If only
Id said "I love you
But i said nothing
I just let you die
I didn't even say
I love you or goodbye

This poem i actually entered in a compettion
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Post by Angel Summers on Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:54 am

The Mask of Humanity

You may think you know us
but really you don’t see what we really are.
we hide behind a mask, the mask of humanity.
No one believes we are real.
We are everywhere your brother,
Sister or your best friend could be one of us.
We hide until the day this world will accept us
For who and what we really are.
We are not all like the stories and myths that
You humans have made up.
We are just like you. we have friends, family
And loved ones. so, when humans wake up
And realize we are realm we will
Continue to wear this mask, the mask of humanity

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Post by Angel Summers on Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:57 am

Breaking Point

She ran out into
The damp moon lit forest
Tears rolling down
Her face.....She
Had finally done the unthinkable...
She couldnt take one
More punch.......
She was tired of the
Abuse.......
She had pulled the
trigger...she finally
Had enough....
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Post by Angel Summers on Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:05 am

The Darkness
Lost in the darkness
There seems no
Way out.
Feeling hopless
Because the
Darkness seems
Endless.
When you think
You see light
And you run to it,
Only to realize
It was just was an
Ilussion.......
The darkness
Has taken over
Your now trapped
In the eternal dream of
Darknrss. the
darkness has
taken over everything


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Post by Angel Summers on Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:09 am

Hiding the Pain
She smiles so everyone
Will think shes alright
She's crying on the
Inside but she hides
Her pain......
She laughs even
Though shes dying inside....
She wants so badly to scream
But she talks quietly
To her friends.....
They dont see how
Bad she really is hurt......
she smiles, talks and
laughs like theres
nothing wrong but
she is slowly dying
on the inside
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Post by Angel Summers on Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:15 am

Gone but definitely not forgotten
You maybe gone
But your surly not forgotten
You still live on in our hearts.
I’ll cry over your death but
I’ll always remember
All the good times
We had together….
I will always remember the
Warmth of your smile.
This isn't goodbye for good
But ill see you again someday.
I love you mommy and I
Cant wait to see you again.
So until that day mommy
I’ll cherish all the great memories
I’ll keep you in my heart and in
My thoughts.
I’ll always miss you and
I’ll always love you


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Post by The GodFather on Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:48 pm

Why are all your poems so sad? It reminds me of a Drowzee eating dreams in place of nightmares, or some wacko depressed Darkrai. Lol

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Post by Angel Summers on Tue Oct 25, 2011 4:39 pm

Idk.....just the way i write
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Post by The GodFather on Wed Oct 26, 2011 4:33 pm

Lol okay then. The way I write is, well, not sad. Lol. Sometimes heartfelt depending what/who I'm writing about, sometimes funny, or sometimes an epic rap song. *

* As shown on the old ToF site, Bitch Better Run has gotten over 15,000,000 hits and made me over $7,000,000. XD Jk

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Post by pants, the noun on Sat Oct 29, 2011 6:21 am

i personally found all of these to be linkin park lyrics without prose, a meter, or premise, but they might have some meaning somewhere in the pretentiousness i read on the surface.

no offense, but you need to work on a premise when you write a poem.
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Post by Angel Summers on Sat Oct 29, 2011 12:54 pm

eh ik i just right down what i think sometimes ive only written a few good ones in my own opinion but only one of them are on here and i gotta add more so we'll see how they are
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Post by Angel Summers on Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:01 pm

A Smile Long Gone


I used to smile
When I passed your house...
I used to smile
When i seen a
Red Rose....
I used to smile when i used
to see you.....
I don't smile
anymore....
You're not mine
I've got no reason
to smile.....
My smile has
Diesapperad....
Never to be seen
again
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Post by Angel Summers on Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:06 pm

You're the best thing that happend to me

You saved me
from my darkness
and carried me into
the light...
You took all my nightmares away
and replaced them with
the sweetest dreams
i've ever had.
The moment you
walked into my life
all the sadness and sowwrow
was washed away and
replaced with happiness
You're the best thing
that has ever happend
to me
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Post by Angel Summers on Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:06 pm

See ryan i can write happy things
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